anr: (sheppardweir otp)
anr ([personal profile] anr) wrote in [personal profile] mylittleredgirl 2005-04-10 01:47 pm (UTC)

FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDBACK. (And I'm so, so sorry it's late.)

Have I mentioned lately how much I adore you?

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From the ficlet you wrote for [livejournal.com profile] truthlostmsr:

Who knew evil was sexually transmitted?

HA! I love evil!Teyla.

Crap. He is courting her. And he stares at her in briefings.

*pats* There, there, John. It's quite ok. After all, she's doing exactly the same thing...

"Don't worry, sir. She gazes at you, too."

... see?

So cute. I love how your brain depicts them.

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From the ficlet you wrote for [livejournal.com profile] medie:

"We're just... seeing each other," he finishes.

heh. Nice save, John.

John shrugs it off; it is hardly the first time that he and Elizabeth have been mistaken for lovers by people they encounter.

And that doesn't that tell you something?!

Either she doesn't notice that she's being backed into the nearest wall

*hums happily at this image*

"Why can't I have that with you?"

Oh. OH. That's... yeah. I love you.

"I can't open up to you that much while still having to stay in control."

*LOVES YOU SO MUCH* Yes. YES. Now THAT'S a reason to not have a relationship. My shipper-heart doesn't like it, of course, but that's ok because it is the best argument against Sheppard/Weir that I've seen yet.

He has been infatuated before, but never like this, so slowly and deeply that it feels like part of him, and it's changing him in a way he doesn't want to give up.

*hums some more*

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From the ficlet you wrote for [livejournal.com profile] vicki595:

their first time was drunk and sloppy and nervous and left him totally terrified that she would never, ever let him anywhere near her naked again

HA! Oh, please tell me you have a fic showing this... along with the much, much better second time. Please.

She loves his reactions to her. This is good, because there's no way he can pretend she isn't able to take him from zero to sixty in 2.5 seconds.

*snickers* They are so adorably sexy together. *loves them*

"It's already on my to-do list, John."

BWAHAHAHA!

I love the issues you raised in this little ficlet, even with all the fluffy-Disney-cuteness. Very insightful look at how John might view a relationship with Weir, like by being never quite sure that she really could love want him as much as he wants her, among other things.

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From the ficlet you wrote for ME:

I. love. you.

Really, really love you.

I have read this ficlet a dozen times or more now and I still can't pick out any favourite lines or words or sections. The whole thing is just BREATHTAKING. And I mean that, literally. Not only do Liz and John get inexorably caught up in each other, but you suck the reader right in and right along with them and it's... yeah. No feedback can do this ficlet justice, hon. It's just too. damn. good.

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